by Sorrows In A Serenade

Hi guys! I’m posting this in response to the Trifextra Writing Challenge at! It’s community judged, so if you like it please spare a few minutes to put in a vote for me (Sorrows In A Serenade)! Really appreciate it, thanks! 😀

Ghosts of boxy apartment

walls wail watching

soul after soul fall; fail

spectacularly –

clean, crisp sheets tugged

up by cold, clammy fingers of hell,

smothering and blinding.

Light succumbs, darkness wins.

Ghosts wail.

more at!

6 Comments to “Ghosts”

  1. Hi Melanie, i went over and found it hard to find where to vote and i think i did, nice poem btw.

    Why don’t you try our little challenge here

  2. I knew you were young but not that young 🙂 i will try and change your name, and maybe a lovely picture of yourself 🙂

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