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Limerick: Pleasing Others

by Venkat

Poetry challenge: Limerick.

How does pleasing others fail?

A missed hit on the head of a nail

By burning your own joy as a toast

Joy of doing what you love most

In the end to satisfy none and wail

© Venkat

Posted on August 23, 2013 at 8:31 PM in Poetry, poetry challenge, Venkat   |  RSS feed |   Reply   |   Trackback URL

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8 Responses to “Limerick: Pleasing Others”

    
  1. Harry
    August 23, 2013 at 8:36 PM

    You are now the official limerick writer 🙂

    Reply
  3. lviswa
    August 24, 2013 at 7:46 AM

    Hi,Venkat,

    You aren’t made to wail by trying to ‘please others’. A lovely limerick.Your spiritual leanings are good.
    Pl.visit.http:// lviswa.wordpress.com.

    Reply

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