Tele antenna, slow metronome
The feathered leaf perches content
Atop the world he heralds
Dawn, sighs unstartled peace
A start, unfinished
Continuity
Cycles on
Never
Ends
© Devina S.
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Tele antenna, slow metronome
The feathered leaf perches content
Atop the world he heralds
Dawn, sighs unstartled peace
A start, unfinished
Continuity
Cycles on
Never
Ends
© Devina S.
Posted on August 27, 2013 at 8:21 PM in Devina, Poetry | RSS feed | Reply | Trackback URL
A lot of thought went into it.
It’s something I’ve thought about often.
MARVELOUS !
Gracias, Deb! I do try not to read too much into ‘comment language’ but there’s no mistaking yours, thank you.
Love that “feathered leaf” phrase!
Thanks, Bee! I like that bit too, if I do say so myself (: I’m still trying to figure out what to literary device it falls under.
Oh I DO love this one!
It’s pleased I am! It amazes me, when I give it a thorough thought, how dawn is like the sleepy sigh of yesterday; not finished business at all.
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