summer sun

by briannadawn

afternoon heat splashes
across parking lots,
making the air
wiggle and squirm –
squirrels lounge in the
polka-dotted shade –
turtles wade and waddle
in and out of the pond, sunlight
transforming it into a
bowl of lemonade –
blades of grass collecting
around its lips like straws –
summer tries to fan herself
with a gentle breeze, but it
hardly does anything at all
____
© Brianna – Tiny Fawns Writings

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6 Comments to “summer sun”

  1. Excellent imagery. Summer trying to fan itself with a gentle breeze is a cool line.

    -PR

  2. How lovely! My favorite lines are “making the air wiggle and squirm” and “summer tries to fan herself.” You captured a summer day eloquently.

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