Like coral grips the rock,
I hold fast to you
Like the ocean embraces the Earth,
I embrace you
Like meat loves salt,
I love you
Copyright © 2017 Kim Whysall-Hammond
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Like coral grips the rock,
I hold fast to you
Like the ocean embraces the Earth,
I embrace you
Like meat loves salt,
I love you
Copyright © 2017 Kim Whysall-Hammond
Posted on May 18, 2017 at 4:45 PM in Kim, Poetry | RSS feed | Reply | Trackback URL
“Like meet loves salt” though i find that a bit funny it is a really sweet simile
Meat is better with a bit of salt… 🙂
Very true ma’am. I agree to that completely. Without my very special salt the meat that i am would taste very bland. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Loved Your descriptions! Nicely done! The one I like the most in this type of comparison is “Evey wave is the ocean’s kiss for the shore”.
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