Summer’s Child – tanka

by Jem Croucher

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Thoughts turn to summer
upon these cold winter days
and a part of me
hibernates and pines away
Here, bereft, cries ‘Summer’s Child’

©Jemverse

Photo – Jempics

Day 3 of 7 in the Jemverse ‘Five Lines’ event – a tanka a day for 7 days.

A tanka is a five-line non-rhyming poem of Japanese origin dating back almost 1200 years. Using simile, metaphor and personification, the five lines must follow a syllabic sequence of 5, 7, 5, 7, 7.

4 Responses to “Summer’s Child – tanka”

  1. That reads like fine wine. Well written!

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