Where Life Sings

by Venkat

where thoughts thundered

this heart held the sky

and I thundered

rolling the Sun

under my shadows


where thoughts flowed

this heart dipped into rivers

and I flowed

glueing fishes

under my boat


where thoughts bled

this heart counted tears

and I bled

slipping time

under my skin


where thoughts froze

this heart lost the eyes

and I froze

knitting love

under my feet


where life sings

this heart stands lost

and I sing

unwrapping thoughts

under my words


image: jp.pinterest.com

12 Comments to “Where Life Sings”

  1. I enjoyed that very much. An abundance of unusual imagery.

  2. Wonderful; loved the verb repetition.

  3. Very nice word picture. Well written.

  4. Beautiful and very passionate.

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