Poetry Challenge: Valentine’s Poem
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Petal me with your soft caress.
Dewdrop me with sensual lips.
Careen me with your seething.
Our heart’s, rhythmical, blend.
Send me to your oasis, tigress.
Tiger Love– haiku
27 Responses to “Tiger Love– haiku”
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Peculiar wording for a non native english speaking.
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…it’s whatever my mind tells me 🙂
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Oh, wasn’t thinking of it in terms of that and there’s many variables to grammar, hum…not sure, but the sentence is correct…
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Where do you live Colly ? Let me draw the conclusions by your ort of living .
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? I’m in Canada, the Shuswap, Enderby.
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It’s a fishing, farming town – community
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You know, I’m of the mind that both dewdrop and petals are nouns (the subject of the sentence ? Although that would also be “me” And I’m assuming only on noun per sentence, of course.
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I agree Colly, what ever comes into your head goes on paper, who really cares if it’s grammatically correct.
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It’s a message of the heart…(lol) 🙂
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I’m just following all the comments, it is correct, see my comment below.
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Sure, understood Dimitrios.
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I got your poem checked and its ok, no errors, here’s the result.
Grammarly was not able to find any errors in your text. Try a different text to see the power of Grammarly.
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Interesting !! And where would that have been, where you checked it ?
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Awe, thanks for the trouble in posting the link !!
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Good to know I was correct on my assumption. There is “many” variables in English grammar, language.
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🙂 🙂
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I love this poem and the freedom to use a noun as a verb, that is a noun which is not normally used as a verb. In poetry one can play with language. Thanks for the Grammarly link, Harry.
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Yes, the freedom of expression is a drawing card in poetry, thanks for the reply Irinadim !
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My pleasure, Colly. 🙂
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🙂
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Your welcome Irinadim I have a lot of links about rhyming etc but they don’t help me write poetry 🙂
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One needs inspiration first and foremost. 🙂
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Right, thanks for your reply !
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