by Jem Croucher


In the daytime, in the forest
I saw a star up in the trees
High up in the leafy green
Filtered through the leaves
I guess it was quite dark in there
with not a lot of light
So the day could be forgiven
for thinking it was night

But I of course knew better
as it was still afternoon
And the star so bright above me
had arrived a little soon
For though it really was a star
We know it as the sun
A ‘starsun’ for these few short lines
Poetic license spun

Photo – ©Jempics

2 Comments to “Starsun”

  1. Remarkable . . .

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