Feelings, Unpunctuated

by Venkat


As the strings
Wrote a song, on my mind
An army of thoughts
Took positions

Gunning down
Outcasts and criminals
Of ungrammatical taste
Of unpunctuated feelings
In the small family, of notes

When will this war end?
Between the string, the army and the grammar?

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5 Comments to “Feelings, Unpunctuated”

  1. Nice work…I appreciate you have a section for ‘Types of Poetry’…great for those of us that are new!

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