The Red trilogy #1

by Jem Croucher


Happen chanced by a field of red
Its colour vivid there
Paused and took some photographs
Felt the need to share
Mesmerised by this spectacle
of rubies in the breeze
I felt a tear arising as
I fell down to my knees
Such scenes as these, such beauty
Must be shared with all around
“Come look” I say “And marvel
at this treasure I have found”

Part 1 – 19/07/2015 – today
Part II – 20/07/2015 – tomorrow
Part III – 21/07/2015 – the day after


8 Responses to “The Red trilogy #1”

  1. I enjoyed the slow release at the last lines. This is where a poem lives and breathes for me. The tension must always break in the mind. Thank you for inviting comments. x


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