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Exciting

by Jem Croucher

Storm over West Pier

Mugginess building
Yellowing skies
reckon we’ll soon be
in for surprise

Distant rumbling
of the thunder
Overhead dark
clouds asunder

Spatters of rain
smack the ground
as people shelter
all around

Then the crack
Electric lightning
It’s scary but
It’s quite exciting

Thunderstorms
my favourite thing
Make me want
to shout and sing

Photo – lightning hits Brighton’s West Pier c.1978 – Jempics

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Posted on June 6, 2015 at 9:16 AM in Jeremy, Photos, Poetry   |  RSS feed |   Reply   |   Trackback URL

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