Poetry challenge, Triquint poem,

by Harry

Triquint Poem.

A poem form created by Sylvia A. Feeley, which consists of 3 verses, 5 lines each.

Lines 3 and 4 of verse 1 (Refrain) repeat in verses 2 and 3.

The syllable count for each stanza is 9, 7, 5, 3, 1 and has an aaAAb rhyme scheme

Example below

Words written in verses, they appeal.
Sung about in songs you feel.
Heartache, all to real.
Ne’er ideal.
Hears.

Emotions which are hard to conceal.
Feelings that are so surreal.
Heartache, all to real.
Ne’er ideal.
Tears.

Beliefs that if you were to reveal,
would cause pain too hard to heal.
Heartache, all to real.
Ne’er ideal.
Fears.

Copyright © 2008 Sylvia A. Feeley

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Thom

M.R.Jaya.

Jeremy

Venkat

Collen

Collen

Heather

20 Responses to “Poetry challenge, Triquint poem,”

  1. Reblogged this on File Cabinet Ramblings and commented:
    A poetry challenge if anyone wants to try it.

  2. Oh my…difficult one….off for the weekend tomorrow….it’ll be on my mind!!!!

  3. Awesomeness(poem)..not to mention very challenging. Whew Never taken any courses in poetry so half to read up on your terminology Harry.

  4. Shame that in her example she misuses to for too :/

  5. too complex for my limited patience

  6. Good challenge this one, Harry. Tricky to work out so that everything fits but good fun. Just published the Jemverse offering.

  7. OMG! Mine’s up! Whew!
    Ellespeth

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