Depth of Nature

by Jonathan

The sea like silken water with its triangular-peaked hills rising in front of me, neither relaxed or in a hurry, flows at a speed I wanted to experience.  I paddled frantically, and suddenly, in a breath, the sensation changed from a pulling through the water to a force pushing onto the azul cliff crest. Then there was the perfect rush down, the fall, a thunder of water behind, a liquid slicing turn along  green-blue scenery, a coal-less steam-powered train ride, the only energy nature’s.

In that breath, that ride, I remember that I too am part of this flowing life, and I shout out, thankful, singing, a prayer from within.  Air rushes past, nothing else can matter, my body and mind are consumed by a few seconds.  A delicious sensation, even the salty taste and scent as I inhale, smiling.

Seaside, I walk up the beach in adoration of nature.  My soul feels like my body felt, like a rock being momentarily launched, skimmed over something deep and alive.  And at the end of the ride, at the end of the moment, I sink into that which I love so much.

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3 Comments to “Depth of Nature”

  1. Please don’t forget the poetry category and use the read more button 🙂 and a very nice poem as well.

  2. Jonathan – I’m not a surfer but the sea is as much as part of me as it clearly is for you. These are fantastic words and capture admirably the love and respect the ocean gives and should receive!

  3. Beautifully done… perception rendered through all emotion, and garnered a moment to LIVE! Beautiful!

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