Poetry challenge: Musette poem
I’m here,
You, no longer
Are near
Leaves blown,
Were swept away
From home
Dear Tree,
I as you, now
Empty
-Heather
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I Am The Tree, Musette poem
14 Responses to “I Am The Tree, Musette poem”
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Lovely Heather it tells the story of the tree.
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“I, as you now” would have been better
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Well done, Heather . . . Nice to see you take the challenge! I agree: ‘I, as you now’ would have been better . . . Not to late to edit it! Blessings . . .
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Went for it, Peter 😉 Thank you!!!!
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Reblogged this on sueshan123blog.
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Thank you, Sueshan 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!…it was wonderful to see how so much can come out of so little. Really a nice art form 🙂 (Thanks to Harry again 🙂 )
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A lovely poem, gentle and moving.
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Thank you for writing , ZJ. Someone taking their time is always the nicest compliment. 🙂 H.
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Emotive, well done
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Thank you, Michelle ❤
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