Like trains
beneath the mountain
passing through tunnels
we move darkness to light
Only then at jagged cliffedge
do we feel the movement
a relentless acceleration
which in the darkness
merely hums
Lucid Moments
9 Comments to “Lucid Moments”
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What wonderful imagery to describe those special moments.
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Thank you Easter Ellen, you’re good at reading between the lines . . .
Blessings . . .-
Your lines are worth reading between. I often find myself reading your poetry twice.. and then it is there before me and I smile at what you are saying.
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You’re too kind . . . Far too kind . . .
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.. maybe I am kind, but I still love the way you weave your images in words, Peter
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Thank you!
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🙂 .. my pleasure, as always, Peter.
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Easter Ellen, this has been an interesting and extended chat . . . I’m wondering: do you read my blog: Gathering Stones on Threads? I think you would like it . . .
Blessings . . .-
.. No I don’t, but you are right, I should. I will look for it.
Thank you and blessings to you also 🙂
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