Like trains
beneath the mountain
passing through tunnels
we move darkness to light
Only then at jagged cliffedge
do we feel the movement
a relentless acceleration
which in the darkness
merely hums
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Like trains
beneath the mountain
passing through tunnels
we move darkness to light
Only then at jagged cliffedge
do we feel the movement
a relentless acceleration
which in the darkness
merely hums
Posted on April 22, 2014 at 3:21 PM in Peter. N, Poetry | RSS feed | Reply | Trackback URL
What wonderful imagery to describe those special moments.
Thank you Easter Ellen, you’re good at reading between the lines . . .
Blessings . . .
Your lines are worth reading between. I often find myself reading your poetry twice.. and then it is there before me and I smile at what you are saying.
You’re too kind . . . Far too kind . . .
.. maybe I am kind, but I still love the way you weave your images in words, Peter
Thank you!
🙂 .. my pleasure, as always, Peter.
Easter Ellen, this has been an interesting and extended chat . . . I’m wondering: do you read my blog: Gathering Stones on Threads? I think you would like it . . .
Blessings . . .
.. No I don’t, but you are right, I should. I will look for it.
Thank you and blessings to you also 🙂
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