Weather: Loop poem.

by Harry

Poetry challenge: Loop poem.

Winter has arrived

arrived with its freezing

freezing weather to bother

bother us all for months

months of trying to keep warm

warm our home and bodies

bodies will be found

found to have died

died from extreme cold

cold that froze it stiff

stiff as the winters chill.

6 Responses to “Weather: Loop poem.”

  1. Oh this is so good Harry! I love it! And its true; I feel for the people who are homeless in winter especially. I cant even begin to imagine it

  2. Wow, excellent poem Harry–really cuts to the heart; well done.

  3. So true if I think of situation in Northern India when gripped with cold for those who are homeless.


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