Overcast Heart

by Caddo

(Fibonacci poem form)

Shroud
Lost sun
September
Weekend, sans colors
Overcast heart, thoughts floundering
Speaking of him in past tense—no facts, but fading faith.

©Bennetta Faire, 2013

11 Comments to “Overcast Heart”

  1. Bennetta what’s Fibonacci ? I’ve gone blank, sorry ~ This is blistering beauty !

  2. good portrayal of sadness.

  3. Love this! I hardly dare try one. I might become obsessed! And end up with my head in a giant crisp bag!

    Maybe it would be a good one to suggest to Harry as achallenge?!

    Hs andSs

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