Diamante poem – Poetry Challenge
Stream
quiet, gentle
rippling, wandering, meandering
stream flowing gently, rushing fiercely
racing, gushing, frothing
deep, deceiving
river
Running Water
7 Responses to “Running Water”
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This is brilliant Christine! I LOVE deep deceiving river, and the middle line, flowing gently, rushing fiercely works SO well!!! Hooray!!! Have a great day and I wish you much flow, and less of the rush:-) Hugs, H xxxxx
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Thank you so much Harula! Now Ive got the hang of fhese I cant stop! They are fascinating and fun to write! And actually they are quite a mindful activity. I know all writing is, but setting out to write something structured requires a hundred per cent attention and that’s what I find these demand so it’s all good! 🙂 an active meditation!
Love and hugs
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Ooooh, very interesting ending, Chris–great the way you turned the poem on its head, I like that!! Hs and Ss
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Thank you Bennetta, i didn’t put the word “stream” in line 4!!! It must have crept there by itself!
Hs and Ss
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VERY good ! Extremely visual ! Feel better dear. Faithfully Debbie
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Thank you very much Debbie! Xx
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