cold rain – poem

by billgncs

I dreamed your seduction
the cold rain a tool
of steaming want
cloaked in shivering goose-bumped laughter

dodging each drop
until that moment I understood
you were the seducer

14 Comments to “cold rain – poem”

  1. You posted it! As i said before, absolutely stunning!

  2. I enjoyed it a lot, with its visceral images, the way you used water in multiple manifestations from cold drops to hot steam, and I love the punchline.
    Russ

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