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by dokurtybitz

Maiden fair
Bearing the burden of two
As one,
A delicate angel
Neither fallen or sainted,

Wending her way
Through a concrete jungle,
Gives little heart
All that is hers
And perhaps a bit more

Posted on March 13, 2013 at 5:04 AM in Mike, Poetry   |  RSS feed |   Reply   |   Trackback URL

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2 Comments to “-13.03.13_00:25-”

    
  1. PÖ3TIC
    March 13, 2013 at 11:24 AM

    Very Good! I like how it seems to mesh the past and present with words like “maiden” and “wending” and then the modern “concrete jungle”. I get a vision of a pregnant woman making her way through the harsh city but still being this fair maiden that floats through like an angel.

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  2. I HAVE A VOICE
    March 13, 2013 at 11:46 PM

    I got an image of a Mother Theresa, full of intelligence that’s balanced with compassionate understanding ~lovely !

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