Tripping

by Chatty Owl

Eyes. Closed.
Mouth. Not.
Neither are legs.
Hands. Locked.
Together with yours.
Above us.
Smells. Intensified.
Movements. Quicker.
Than the heart rate.
Lover-like. Affairs.
Animal-like. Actions.
Us. Lusting.
Over each other.
With no. Happy end.
To finish off. With.

13 Comments to “Tripping”

  1. So much in few words.. loved it totally 😀

  2. I love the emotion that is elicited by the abrupt words and breaks…good job 🙂

  3. I really like this poem of yours!
    Good stuff!
    Really!

  4. Excellent use of periods to highlight the short, matter-of-fact manner in which the act described is being carried out! It really removes any idea that emotion is involved, just pure physical gratification only!

  5. Stunning use of. Punctuation.

  6. Lovely poem and welcome to poets corner enjoy your time here.

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