loves fist

by billgncs

Karen from A Reason 2 Rhyme has offered a poetry / writing challenge. Stop over Mondays and give it a try. Here’s a haiku

Monday’s rose hidden
Wednesday’s card, secret terror
Friday’s fist draws blood

8 Comments to “loves fist”

  1. very intriguing and sets emotional wheels to roll~ Thank you ~ Blessings ~Deborah

  2. I just cannot get my head around it Bill.

    • someone sends her a flower on monday, and her husband/lover rewards her with a bruise that blooms like the same.

      Then on Wednesday, someone sends her a card declaring their love, or perhaps a birthday card, and she is terrified that her abuser will find out.

      friday, he finds out, and beats her severely. His love for her declared with a fist.

  3. She has a very bad life with him, she should leave him 🙂

    Did you get the email i sent you last week, its maybe in spam.

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