Karen from A Reason 2 Rhyme has offered a poetry / writing challenge. Stop over Mondays and give it a try. Here’s a haiku
Monday’s rose hidden
Wednesday’s card, secret terror
Friday’s fist draws blood
loves fist
8 Comments to “loves fist”
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very intriguing and sets emotional wheels to roll~ Thank you ~ Blessings ~Deborah
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thanks Deborah, how do you interpret it, or see it?
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I just cannot get my head around it Bill.
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someone sends her a flower on monday, and her husband/lover rewards her with a bruise that blooms like the same.
Then on Wednesday, someone sends her a card declaring their love, or perhaps a birthday card, and she is terrified that her abuser will find out.
friday, he finds out, and beats her severely. His love for her declared with a fist.
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She has a very bad life with him, she should leave him 🙂
Did you get the email i sent you last week, its maybe in spam.
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that’s the poem, why would someone stay? Love?
don’t think I saw it, the email. if you resend I will check
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I will send it to-morrow so you can keep an eye on spam.
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will do
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