Dream-Kiss

by russtowne

Asleep in our bed
So soft and warm.
A gentle touch
On my shoulder
Tells me she’s there.


My head slightly lifts
Sleepy eyes barely open.
She kisses my lips
Whispers “I love you”
Then is gone.
–Russ Towne

5 Comments to “Dream-Kiss”

  1. Ahhh why the ending! So cruel! Very nice, sweet and subtle poem though! =)

  2. I agree lovely poem and, then is gone.

  3. Dear charmedbylove and Harry: Thank you for your comments and compliments. Perhaps this will help explain it: I work from home and have no commute, so My Beloved often leaves for work before I rise in the morning. That leads to this morning ritual that I love so much I wrote a poem about it. Don’t worry she returns every night! ;-D!

    Harry: Is it ok with you if I sometimes say a sentence or two about the genesis or backstory of the poem when posting it? I think in some cases readers might get a richer experience for it.

    Russ

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