perhaps remorse was not her cup of tea, but still sometimes poetry inspires poetry — thanks Whimsey
I touch your fevered brow
frowning at the peril
regretting
flames I could not kindle
fevered – poem
4 Comments to “fevered – poem”
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I love this!
So much can be said in few words, sometimes much more than verse after verse 🙂
I think it is often more difficult to write a short poem; similar to a short story, they can be challenging.
Christine
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thanks – I am glad you liked it. Poetry does pack meaning into few words, much more than prose.
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Delicious, Bill…..love it….. 🙂
Celeste-
thanks! Always glad when you comment
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