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tempered – haiku

by billgncs

the beautiful haiku sorrow just preceding made me think of this….

Iron hones iron
tears tempered, becoming stone
diamonds slicing glass

but, no…. how about this….

Iron hones iron
tears tempered, glistening stones
diamonds slicing glass

Posted on September 1, 2012 at 1:03 AM in Bill, Haiku, Poetry   |  RSS feed |   Reply   |   Trackback URL

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