sparrows and broken wings…

by billgncs

I want you to know

I would be intimate with you,
and know your soul
but you dance away on gossamer wings
to protect your heart

Let my arms enfold you
and still your fears
we will gently sway from side to side
in this dance of life

I will release you
and shed a tear
when you are strong and trust in love
without regret

Too passive, let’s try again…

Let me love you,
and know your soul
but you dance away on gossamer wings
to protect your heart

My arms enfold you
and still your fears
we gently sway from side to side
in this dance of life

I will release you
and shed a tear
when you are strong and trust in love
without regret

which do you prefer?

8 Comments to “sparrows and broken wings…”

  1. I like both, but the second one best…
    really good
    Take Care..
    )0(
    ladybluerose

  2. I want you to know….. I love this! And I choose #2….yes, a direct approach suits you….you command the attention of the reader, I like that…. 😉
    Celeste

  3. I like the second one best – love it!

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