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Say it. Say it so it’s imprinted on the air
between us and isn’t just a question
deep in my entrails.
Tell me you don’t love me
so my heart can be released,
free to fly.
This absence of words between us
ties me to you.
Just in case.
Just in case this isn’t all in my head.
I know the feeling!!
Really, really well.
Love the poem. Very well written!!
I love conflict and emotion here.Though, I am not sure you have earned the ending quite yet. Simple because as a reader you quickly tied me into this piece-and then left me wanting more.
Very perceptive! I couldn’t decide how to finish this one properly so I put it out anyway!
I have been there too. Most of my work here is unrevised-only because I strongly dislike the process. You truly have an amazing way with words. Thanks for being an inspiration to fellow writers 🙂
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