Poems, poets, poetry,writing
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late again, sigh…
In spring things rise or some still do
The compass north points
Straight and true
Away to duty beckons brightening dawn
The poet’s best work
Remains undone
Duty fades, sundial unheeded
In morning’s garden
Tending needed
Oh cooing dove, wings wide spread
Now two can face
The day ahead
beautiful, good rhythm and cadence ~thank you ~Sincerely Deborah
I am glad you enjoyed it, I hope it worked and made you smile.
I love that line, ‘away to duty beckons brightening dawn’, and also the image of the cooing dove that offer company – indeed, we are never alone in nature.
indeed, thanks for commenting, I especially enjoy input.
I love the rhyme in this. It sort of meanders soothingly.
“…now two can face the day ahead” – this resonates with me very much indeed
Lovely
Christine
Love the rhythm, the breaks and the choice of words here.
thanks bee seeker!
I like this a lot and especially love:
The poets best work
Remains undone
and
Now two can face
The day ahead
Russ
thanks Russ! It was a bit of a fun romp!
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